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//Welcome all to the story that will be turned into a game. Remember to view all the rules from the other post.
//Ok so how will this work? First off I play Diane so no one take her place. Other characters can be played too as long as they have not been reserved. If you wish to reserve a character use the previous post (the one that says "Small tibit I had") to post anything other than the story. And of course use the // to comment.
//Ok so lets get started.
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//Not neccersarly need the #MWin() but I took it from the game and didn't bother editing it out.
#Mwin("Crovona, a city of power and division. Were small powers can grow")
#Mwin("in a small length of time. Whether it be malevolent or benevolent")
#Mwin("they grow.")
#Mwin("This is a country of strength that cannot be disputed. or even")
#Mwin("comprehended.")
#Mwin("Crovona started small and grew to two sections. Monarge and")
#Mwin("Benevue.")
#Mwin("Monarge is a city ruled by their God Modjen. He gained the throne when")
#Mwin("since the begining of all creation.")
#Mwin("Benevue, a very strange city. Its inhabitants are said not to be")
#Mwin("human. They are seen as beast of some unholy abyss.")
#Mwin("Benevue kind are harsh and disorderly. They will stop at nothing for")
#Mwin("their quest to take Crovona...then the world.")
#Mwin("War is what is understood. War is what is known. War is the saying of")
#Mwin("the ones damned to live in Crovona.")
Diane enters the castle.
//And that is not Bradford on the pic. Remember that she looks alot like a guy
(http://http://jupiter.walagata.com/w/tkgameboy/Modje.gif)
Diane-"Thank you Holy One."
Modje-"Ma ferror ty shampporin for. Lets quio sep ban pon conk."
Diane-"What do you mean?"
Modje-"Mei not Benevue te wor ferror min to quio fret sa pe. Eij can nei she fro tou letmetan."
Diane-"What is to be done? We cannot compete with the Benevue kind."
Modje-"No apre feaa llid messt erer she ase help mosk. Mai quio tyou frei she. Ahjl not Monarge asteew belald. Yuiob not she fre pan?"
Diane-"No Holy One."
Modje-"Modje as presst not ple me quio na se pearar."
Diane-"Very well Holy One. I will see what I can do."
Modje-"Naio ma TEM MA!!!!!!!!!!"
The gaurds cheer as well.
Diane steps outside.
Diane (thinking)-"Insanity. Modje wants me to assasinate the leader of Monarge?"
She then see's Bradford.
"Hey Bradford!!!! Over here."
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//Ok word about the God. Well I decided to change it from a King to a God cause I drew the guy to big and was to lazy to redraw it. Ok so it goes that it is not a real God, its a Demigod. Half human, half God. So anyways he is not the God Modjen but talks through this Idol who is named Van. Though the real God doesn't really speak but its Van who speaks for him.
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//Not one reply yet. :huh:
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*bradford walks up to Diane*
"What is it,what did he say??"Bradford asks curiosly.
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Diane-"He's asking me to go and fight the rebel leader of Benevue. What does the all mighty one think when he is sending me to such an impossible task?"
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Bradford :huh: -"I don't know,maybe now is the time to do it,the timen he's most vanuraleble or something."
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Lance-"Exuce me but I beilve you should be on your way to your mission soon..."
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//ACK! I wanted lance to come later in the game. He was gonna be my fourth character. Oh well.
Diane-"Hey who are you? We are having a private conversation here. You can't just butt in like that."
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Lance-"Well exuuuuuuuse me!!!" *walks off and leaves*
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"Do you know him?"Bradford whispers to Diane
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//Yeah guys sorry about that, I was just going to have him be a minor charactor untill he joins//
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//Well for now he can be in the story but after we leave the town, he must come after Ronald joins the group. Ok?
Diane-"No. I never seen armor like that before. But anyways he was right. I better get moving. Let me just go home and change into my other armor."
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"ok then,would there be anyway I can go to?.......In the group thats going out with you."
//lol I couldent resist\\
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Diane-"Group? Oh my. Modjen didn't say anything about going along with a group. I think he wants me to go forth alone. Oh my. Well even the great one must know that I need of aid. Hmm. Bradford if you are not too busy, please come with me."
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"Of corse I'll go,I was board anyway.Why would he send you alone?"
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Diane-"T'is a strange God. Im not familiar with him. He works in mysterious ways. Im surprise he still doesn't know I am a woman. Hmm. Well it is no concern. Prepare yourself while I go and prepare my self. When your ready meet me by the fountain."
She goes to her house and changes her armor and then returns to the fountain.
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Bradford:"Yes mam,I mean sir! ahh you know what I mean."
*goes to the barricks to prepare too.*
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At the fountain Diane waits.
Diane (thinking)-"Modjen better know what he is doing for sending me on this quest. Im not sure if he is a real god but a god is a god right?"
#Delay(5)
Diane (thinking)-"My how the times have gone by with me and Bradford. Just like yesterday we were kids playing in the pond."
*She then pictures a pond
"That was our secret spot where we would swim and giggle all day."
*Now pictures the pond in the present date, all dried up
"Sadly it's gone now. To make way for the future: Another Modjen Monestary. *Sigh*"
#Return()
#Delay(5)
Diane-"Where is he? He should be ready by now."
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Bradford walked up to the founten.
"I'm reddy,are you?"he asked.
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//Story on hiatus till tuesday. I need some time to catch up.
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Diane-"Yeah lets go."
Bradford joins the party
So the two of them headed outside of the city into the forest of Maze. Upon walking through the path they saw something in the distance. The lake. The old lake that Diane and Bradford spent countless times as kids. The lake that is now dried up.
"The lake. Oh I can't believe they dried it up. Oh woes me."
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Bradford looked at the lake.
"it....it can't be,mabie now I can!"He says
*runs to lake and starts digging.*
*looks at Diane*
"If you help me find it, it'll be.... oh you'll see! come on and help for a sec!"
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"Huh?"
Diane was dumbfounded but helped Bradford dig.
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After a bit of digging Diane Finds a locket.
Bradford walks over.
"You found it! I've been wondering if I would ever find it!"Bradfords says as another flashback of when the lake was full,it shows bradford throwing it in the lake.
//lol a little mini game....sorta...\\
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//A mini game? Hardly since its just a memory.
"What is this locket you found Bradford?"
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//I meant while you look for the locket,you might find a few other things too\\
"its,oh..well too late now..."
*Opens locket showing a pic of Daine and Bradford.*
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The picture showed them together at the lake. Diane blushed a little.
"I remember now. You spent all your dowry on a artist to draw us together. Oh I will never forget that though I was pretty weirded out too. I thought you were in love with me back then." She blushes again.
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Bradford Blushes to.
"Yeah,I know,I may have been..then of corse..."He says as he blushes again.
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An akward silence arises. Diane then felt uncofortable.
"Uh, ti's not the time to dwell on nostalgia. Come on. We got to keep moving."
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"yeaahh lets go..."He says....
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They walk all over the forest when they reach the town of Upword.
"Hey Bradford, doesn't your brother work in that bakery?"
She points to a bakery.
"I bet he could give us free food for our mission."
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"oh yeah he does,he hasn't sent me anything in a while,I cant wait to have some more of his bread....MMMmmm...."He says
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They walk over to the bakery only to find it closed.
"Oh what bad luck. It's closed. Where could your brother have gone too?"
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Bradford sighed."I,don't know,he's should be open today too."he said as he sighed again and reatched under the welcome mat."Mabey we could find out inside."He said as he smiled and walked in.
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"A key under the door mat. That's a little too obvious."
They enter the room and a cat ran out like a friggin jet.
"Whoa! What was that."
They look inside and it was empty.
"Hey there's nothing in here. No bread or equipment. What happen? Did he go out of buisness?"
//Okay now time to tell you ppl progress on the game. First I made a nifty prompt so incase you don't like the name Diane or Bradford, you can give it another name though I still need to figure out how to put small letters but that shouldn't take long. The BS hasn't been touched for some time but its good. The prob is with defence where the characters defend. It works but visually it wont refresh the screen and two images show up. Ima see what I can do. I did an awesome victory thing where you can see the experience being added to yours (kinda like in arcade games where the score you gets added up).
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"I don't know,theres gota be a note or something,he wouldn't just move like this. Poor kitty..."Bradford says as he keeps looking around,for anything that might tell them something,other than the cat.
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Diane searches the place but doesn't find anything but a loaf of bread.
"Well at least we got something from it."
They leave the bakery and head on.
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"Sigh,I wish he could have given me a sign,or something."Bradford says as he takes one last look at the shop and finds a note on the window.
"huh why didn't we see this before?"he asked as he looked at it.
//I'll let you choose what the note says....\\
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//kay
The note read
Dear friends,
I have decided to close down this shop because lack of funds. I do not wish for you to be angry so I leave you with all the bread you can have. Thank you my friends.
Leanord
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Bradford stairs at the note for a sec,and hands it to Diane."Not...not so soon!"He said as he handed it to her.
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"Whats the matter? What is going on?"
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"Read the note,you'll see."He said as he sat next to the shop.
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Diane reads the note.
"So he just gets up and leaves without notifying you? I can't believe that."
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"Sigh,niether can I,it doesn't seem like him. there has to be some other reason. But what?"he asked himself.
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"Let's ask around the town, maybe we can get an answer."
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"Sigh,may as well...."Bradford says
*Bradford rejoins group*
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So they go around searching for anyone with info on the disapearance of Bradfords brother.
They have no such luck when they talk to the last person.
"This town doesnt know anything. We only got that he was in financial debt. That's all."
Then a stranger appears.
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Lia looked at the stranger."Are you friend or foe?"He asked.
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//Can I be the stranger dude? What do I do? What do I do?//
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//Sure Dude Man. Its a long way till Lance comes.
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"I am nobody's enemy...But I do know lots of things...You have been asking alot of people questions...Maybe I can help..."
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"I hope so.... ok sorta..."Bradford admits.
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"Then what can I do for you?" The stanger asks
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"I want to know why my brothers bread shop closed down. and when."Bradford said.
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"Hmmm....Well I do remember warriors of Monarge going in there awile ago...Maybe the forced him to close the shop?"
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"What?!? When!?! Where did he go!?!? Tell me!!"
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"That's strange. If Monarge soldiers came into this town then this place should be finished with. How come they only came after Bradford's brother?"
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"Well I'm not sure I just saw a monarge soilder go in there. I was scared but I didn't really panic at the time....Ummm..." The strangers eyes start to flicker
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"Hey wait a minute. Why are we listening to you? Who are you anyways?"
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"Well, well, well...You don't seem to belive me do you? I am Xzagor...A spy for the monarge! There for you must die!!!" The man yelled as he then swung out a large syth *Like the Grim Reaper's, but it's more of drill like blade* "DEATH TO YOU ALL!!"
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//Im guessing this is a battle scene. Well if it is Im gonna need info about Xzagor's powers and fighting skills.
Diane takes her lance.
"Fine, bring it on!"
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// Xzagor uses his syth and a special move called Dark Strike, that causes severe damge to the target and another one called Tri Syth Slash, basically slashes is syth 3 times, might be a cool special, he also jumps alot to dodge attacks//
Xzagor jumps in the air and on his way down he hopes to slash Diana with his syth!
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//Ack! I keep forgeting to program a dodge feature. Well ill see what I can do.
Diane dodges it. She then charges with her lance.
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Xzagor Jumps up dodgeing the lance and flips backwords kicking Diane in the face
"That outa fix that ugly face for ya!" Xzagor taughts
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Bradford watches this,he starts to think,he runs at Xzagor with his sword and tries to cut his leg.
"Don't kill him Diane! We can get more info about what happend!!"Bradford says.
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Xzagor falls to the ground as his leg gets cut he thenget back up and swings his syth at Branford "You die!!!" He yells
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Bradford jumps back.
"Ha! You... ARG!!! My leg!!!"Bradford says as he falls,his sword slides twords Xzagor's head pretty fast.
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The sword then stabs Xzargor's head and causes to pierce threw his temple and causeing severe damage to the brain! Xzargor then dies...
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"NOOoooo.... now I'll never know!"Bradford says sadly as he holds his leg and tries to get up,he just falls down though.
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"Huh? For a Monarge, his skull wasn't that thick."
She pulls out the sword.
"Here."
As she hands Bradford back his sword it starts to melt from the blood.
"Hey. The blood melted the sword. He was a monarge all right."
//Oi he died? Ack. Well I guess I better remove the profile program for him
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"heh I guess so,but now I can't find out exactly what hapend to my brother..."Bradford says as holds his leg and gets up,he takes the handle of the sword and looks at it."This might be sellable,or have another blade attached."He said as kept ahaold of his leg.
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People started to gather.
"We better get moving. Seems like a crowd is gathering."
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One of the people runs up to them
"What happend! You killed somebody!? Why?!" He asked
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She then started talking in a mans voice.
"Calm down. It appears he was a spy for the Monarge army. We had to kill him for your safety."
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The man walks back and goes back to what he is doing
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In a femine voice:
"Come on Bradford, this town is getting quiet suspicious of us."
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One of the people turns around in confusing of over hearing a voice change and then rases his eye brows and shakes his head and turns back around
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Bradford grabed Daines hand and ran through the crowed.He didn't even think what it would look like to other people.
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"FAGS!" Yelled out one of the people
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Upon leaving the town they are on the other side of the forest. Only this part is much darker. Theyre dwell evil elves and creatures called Magots.
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//heh evil elves,aka drows, live under ground or in moutins,rarly comeing out but sometimes do.. but ok!\\
Bradford let go of her hand.
"I hope you didn't think anything wierd like ..... yeah....."Bradford said and stoped himself while blushing.
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"Why are you blushing like that? You just held my hand."
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Bradford stoped blushing and started walking.
"We should get tere soon."He said acting like what just happend didn't.
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//I think it's time for an intermission
Upon the dark skies in the Monarge castle called E23, King Faust was in his quarters along with Blix.
Faust-"Xzargo? Dead? What a pity."
Blix-"Should I sent out Mannixx?"
Faust-"Could you?"
Blix-"Yes my liege."
Blix leaves the room.
Faust-"...Richard. Hmm. Enjoy being a man, Diane, till your time comes."
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Bradford asks somewhere in the forest.
"Um..... where are we???"
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"I don't know. aren't you familiar with this place?"
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"Heh not this part."
"I think we need to go that way."
*points up on the screen*
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They walked throughout all the forest and see a cave in the end.
"Well this is unfamiliar."
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"Yeah. I don't think I've ever seen this cave. Should we go in?"
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//A conundrum. I wish to make this part a selection of wheather we go in or not. What do you think?
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//meh... I think we should play it going into it.\\
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//Bah you no fun.
"Yeah. Let's see what this is about."
They entered the strange cave. Inside was as black as when you close your eyes and see only that darkness.
They stepped outside again.
"Whoa! It's as dark as hell in there."
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//lol a side quest!!\\
"Guess we'll need some torches."
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'Well I don't have anything to light this place up. What about you?'
//BTB: I changed my name to an acronym. The other name got boring for me.
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"Nope.... mabie a.....town could... nevermind..."He said relizeing they were in a forest.
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"Well let's forget about this cave. We got stuff to do."
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"heh... ok."Bradford says.As they leave he watches the cave.
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A pair of creepy glowy eyes blink in the cave and then disappear
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"Did you see that Diane?!?"
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"See what?"
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"The Cave! It looked at me.... big red eyes...."Bradford says as he takes a step twords it.
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She looks back.
"Have you been eating that white stuff again?"
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Bradford laughs.
"No... but I still did see them."
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The eyes come back and blink a few times and then dissapper again
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"There they are again!"Bradford says as he points.
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"Come on. Your just imagining things. I don't see anything."
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The eyes appear again and blink a few times more and then make a larger glow, they blink a few more times and then dissappear, once more!
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Bradford pointed again."No... I'm not.... whach and see for your self..."
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"Okay, now your just trying to scare...uh, whats wrong with your left eye?"
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"My left eye? nothing I think...."Bradford says as he looks at her.
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"Uhh."
She pulls out a mirror and he stares at his left eye which is pure black except for the white dot as teh pupil.
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"How did that happen???"
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Then there was a monstrous groaning sound emitting from the cave.
"What was that?"
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A black figure appears from the cave, the eye's belong to it!
//I'll have TKGB to say what the monster is Razz //
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The monster was pure black with spikes on its back. He had hands with 3 claws in each finger and big snout in the mouth, almost like some kind of dragon.
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The monster makes a feroitous roar and runs at our heros with much hostiliaty
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//Just a small announcement. My expo booth features ZD. check it out.
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"Ack! Come on Daine!"Bradford says as he grabs her hand and Pulls her out of the way along with himself.
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The monster then shakes his head in rage and then cases the 2 gaining and gaining closer...
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Diane-"This is getting us nowhere. If we are to delude the beast, we have to kill it."
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"Do you know of any weak spots?"Bradford asked.
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"Yes. This looks like a apalala so we must use ice attacks."
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//Due to the unexpected rebooting that I had to do, this project is official closed.
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Sad Aw, to bad, I was starting to enjoy this. Oh well it was fun wile it lasted
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Yeah and it got to a good part good. Ack. It's just goes to show you that you must backup files frequently because you never know when your computer stops working correctly.
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Yeah I guess your right. But it takes up alot of space on your computer to do that. I aswell had something like this happen.
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yep.... Sad
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Yup...