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« Reply #15 on: June 02, 2004, 04:25:38 PM »
//Oi what about the ex-soldier I explained in the begining.  This seems like a perfect opportunity to have her show up again.

She dipped her bucket again but came out empty.

"UGH!  Damn bastards.  They drank all the water.  Wasn't the ale that they sucked dried from the pub enough???"  She then started to walk to a house.  She knocked on the door.

Jenkins-"Hey who's that?"
Jenkins father-"Well it's the middle of the night.  It must be Fi."
Colban-"Fi?"

Jenkins father opened the door.

Fi-"Wellsy, im sorry to bother you this late of night but you wouldn't happen to have any water.  My kids are thirsty."
Wellsy-"Yes, I happen to have some.  Wait here."

Wellsy and Jenkins then went to the kitchen.  Fi then saw Colban.

Fi-"Oh im sorry.  I didn't see you there."
Colban-"Uhh...yeah."

Colban *thinking*-Oh my god.  It's her.  I didn't thougt I would see her again
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« Reply #16 on: June 03, 2004, 11:08:11 AM »
// I'm confused about the 'her'. Is she the female warrior from the begining? I thought that at first, but then I analyzed it for a minute and the lady wound'nt have ever come into contact with Colban before if she's an ex-soldier. The lady who attacked him with the rest of that squad was still in the army. o.o
« Last Edit: December 31, 1969, 06:00:00 PM by Cyber Wolf »

         <span style=\'color:green\'>The Cyber Wolf- End Transmission

</span>


We barely remember who or what came before this precious moment,
We are choosing to be here right now. Hold on, stay inside
This holy reality, this holy experience.
Choosing to be here in

This body. This body holding me. Be my reminder here that I am not alone in
This body, this body holding me, feeling eternal
All this pain is an illusion.

Alive, I

In this holy reality, in this holy experience. Choosing to be here in

This body. This body holding me. Be my reminder here that I am not alone in
This body, this body holding me, feeling eternal
All this pain is an illusion.

Twirling round with this familiar parable.
Spinning, weaving round each new experience.
Recognize this as a holy gift and celebrate this chance to be alive and breathing.

This body holding me reminds me of my own mortality.
Embrace this moment. Remember. we are eternal.
all this pain is an illusion.

Parabola, by Tool

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« Reply #17 on: June 03, 2004, 12:00:40 PM »
//Uhh re-read the second post.  That was another scene away from the part were Colban was being chased by soldiers.
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« Reply #18 on: June 03, 2004, 12:49:01 PM »
//I know, but doesn't that mean Colban has never had contact with her that we know of? okay, I'll make something up.


Colban had seen this lady when he was a younger. She was his former girlfriend. They broke up over something stupid and Colban could not recall what it was. Fi thanked Wellsy and left without even noticing Colban. Colban stayed silent. Jenkins noticed Colban acted odd around Fi but didn't bring it up. Wellsy doctored Colbans wound with an herbal remedy and tied a piece of cloth to Colbans wound with a leather strap. Wellsy went to sleep in his bed while Colban and Jenkins slept on blankets and pillows on the floor. Jenkins and Wellsy were asleep, but Colban was still up, thinking about Fi. That morning, Wellsy made some breakfast, then the 3 set off to the castle on the buggy to kill the King.
« Last Edit: December 31, 1969, 06:00:00 PM by Cyber Wolf »

         <span style=\'color:green\'>The Cyber Wolf- End Transmission

</span>


We barely remember who or what came before this precious moment,
We are choosing to be here right now. Hold on, stay inside
This holy reality, this holy experience.
Choosing to be here in

This body. This body holding me. Be my reminder here that I am not alone in
This body, this body holding me, feeling eternal
All this pain is an illusion.

Alive, I

In this holy reality, in this holy experience. Choosing to be here in

This body. This body holding me. Be my reminder here that I am not alone in
This body, this body holding me, feeling eternal
All this pain is an illusion.

Twirling round with this familiar parable.
Spinning, weaving round each new experience.
Recognize this as a holy gift and celebrate this chance to be alive and breathing.

This body holding me reminds me of my own mortality.
Embrace this moment. Remember. we are eternal.
all this pain is an illusion.

Parabola, by Tool

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« Reply #19 on: June 03, 2004, 12:59:00 PM »
//Not neccesarly.  He could of.  Though you wrapped it up nicely.

Jenkins looked at Colban and found that this is the opportinuty to ask about Fi.

Jenkins-"Uhh...Colban.  Did you know that lady?"
Colban-"HUH!?  WHAT!?"
Jenkins-"Uhh...Nothing.  Nothing."

Jenkins stayed silent.  Then suddenly a loud crack sounded followed by the buggy going out of controlled.

Jenkins-"DAMN.  The wheel broke again.  JETSAM!"

They all got out of the buggy as it fell on it side.  The horse, who Jenkins named Harry, was suprisingly not hurt.

Colban-"Again?"
Wellsy-"You still using the same axel?  I told you to repair it when I gave it to you."
Jenkins-"I DID!  I don't know what happened."
Colban-"Well now what?"
Wellsy-"What else?  We walk."
Colban-"Just what I need.  More blisters."

They started to walk on the open plain.
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« Reply #20 on: June 03, 2004, 08:51:26 PM »
Meanwhile, a dark armored man was talking with the King inside his  castle..

King: "So you're sure you can do the job?"
Unknown: "Sure? Of course I'm sure."
King: "Good. So Colban will be eliminated?"
Unknown: "Of course, sir."
King: "Good...Bring back his head, as proof of his extermination."
Unknown "I will, I will have him dead as soon as I can!"
King: "Excellent, once your done you will have your pay!"
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