Hey guys <Handle: Melchoir> here, hoping I can join with you guys this chapter. I'm very new at Play-by-Post RPing, so take it easy on me if I mess up Wink.
I've got two characters here for judgment, lemme know if there's anything that needs changing or redoing (such as the entire character, HA!), if I'm missing something, or if you have any overall questions or suggestions. I hope I wasn't too descriptive...
Characters:
-Bishop
-Jasper
"Well... I think I look dashing..."
Name: Unnamed (has recently been referred to as "Bishop")
Gender: Asexual (uses male pronouns)
Race: Gel
Specialization: None
Age: 7 (A human equivalent of 35)
Job: None
Weapon: Jasper (described separately)
Alliance: None
Description: Bishop is a medium-small gel, a normally primitive and simple creature. He is slightly smaller then an average Labrador Retriever, has a volume of approximately 14 gallons (53 liters), weighs 197 pounds (89 Kilograms), and is an opaque light blue in color.
Bio: Bishop was an unremarkable gel living in the northern continent. A week after an uncomfortable bright light frightened most of the wildlife into hiding, he came across a human corpse in the middle of nowhere, with only mild decay (a high point in any gels day). While digesting the corpse over the next few days, Bishop began to ponder what to do next. This, of course, startled him, as gels do not normally ponder. While mulling over his new found sense of "self" he set off, taking both the now skeletons belt and dagger (following Jasper's urging) and the skeletons leather cap 'because it looked nice' (against Japer's wishes, much to it's surprise and dismay).
"Just because you cannot see your wielder, do not think you are any less a weapon then I."
Name: Jasper
Gender: Asexual (uses genderless pronouns)
Race: None (Item)
Specializations: Twilight Magic, Telepathy, Dagger Mastery
Age: 176
Job: Currently None
Weapon: Itself, Bishop (Bishop is the title it gives it's wielder)
Alliance: The Red King
Description: Jasper is an ornate, intelligent dagger about 14 inches (35.56 centimeters) in length. It's handle seems expertly carved from a single amazingly large emerald, but it's surface is smooth, and it intangibly adjusts to be more comfortable to it's wielder. It's blade is simplistic in design, made of a mysterious metal, swirled in equal parts pearl white and opal black. It has a gruff, commanding personality. It is practically powerless without a wielder (the most it can do is harshly insult).
Bio: The Sovereign’s Hammer was unprecedentedly powerful, and it's effects were subtly felt throughout the time-space continuum and the multiverse. Six miles from Gros Morne, at the moment the shockwave tore through the air, a well dressed body fell to the ground. This was Balthasar, Jasper's former Bishop. And he was dead before he hit the ground. The shock of the event, and the surprising and painful lose of a Bishop, has heavily jarred and baffled Jasper.
Well, that's it from me, I hope I got the idea across well. Lemme know what'cha think!