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[Mark of the Dragon]

LOL.

I usually write poetry when I'm in love, but it normally takes like 5 months of being in a relationship for me to actually decide to write. But a couple days after meeting her online? There must be something about her.

[Cesque]

Penpal? Hmm, I don't trust "penpal love", but I hope it'll be good for ya  Laughing

And that's strange, I usually write poetry when I'm furious with something. I make rhymes cursing God, space balance, humanity, Devil, Church, false prophets, hypocrits, everything! Depends on my mood.

Sometimes I write something more optimistical  Very Happy Rarely.

[Haraldur]

I don't trust love. Maybe because I have not had it.

[Spyder]

I had a semi-long-distance relationship once. Lasted a good eight months. Girl turned out to be too religious, as well as was talking marriage at 18 (I was only 16 at the time). I broke up with her, and she reacted by ODing on pain killers....twice.

[Mark of the Dragon]

Well, Esther is Christian, and she does take it a little seriously, but I'm not going to mind. And I won't have to worry about her talking marriage too soon. And the chances of her ODing on painkillers is slim to none.

[Cesque]

Damn, the true problem is: Where to find a panteo-gnostico-christian girl in Poland? Ah, nevermind... Gnostic at least!

[DarkElite]

cool, go christians!!  Very Happy

hmm....love? most of my poems arent when we're in a relationship....but now this? i have the strangest feeling for them....i dont know how to explain it.... but you know how some guys say: "I would take a bullet for you if I had to."? well, that's not me...it's not that i would if i had to...but that i want to.............i want to sacrifice my life to save her....

which is why i have that stuff about sacrifice in my poem...

[Cesque]

Stone him outside of the walls of the city
At his will he got rid of his highest sancticity
Before the earthly life he put the words of his deity

And now he's dying at his very own will
He whispers words to God before his lips turn still
For his blasphemous words he faced blashpemous kill

Sabbath for a man not a man for sabbath
Religion for a man not a man for religion
Faith for life not life for faith

- "Saint", Cesque

[Mark of the Dragon]

Not bad, Cesque.

[Cesque]

Thanks  Laughing

It's more of a song, than a lyric - but still I have nothing to play on for accompaniament.

[Mark of the Dragon]

Oh, here's what I wrote (keep in mind I wrote it late at night)

Across the many ocean waves
In a land distant from home.
A force attracting my heart
From a source true beauty'th own.

Skin as smooth as silk
Her dark eyes consuming me.
Dark hair to make jealous even
That which created she.

A heart accepting a poor soul
Across great distance he comes.
The closer she approacheth thee
The more the heartbeat drums.

Could I have found the one
To make me whole as last?
Or will this be another love
To fade away too fast?

[DarkElite]

i like abab poems the most...they're the best

[Mark of the Dragon]

Lol. Ur looking at the only style of poetry I can write.

[Dude Man]

I only write poetry when I have to for school, but I always do good. I might do it just for fun sometimes

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I had a semi-long-distance relationship once. Lasted a good eight months. Girl turned out to be too religious, as well as was talking marriage at 18 (I was only 16 at the time). I broke up with her, and she reacted by ODing on pain killers....twice.
Sounds almost as bad as mine.  Laughing

[Mark of the Dragon]

Well, I've written quite a bit for fun, and I've even been published once.