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« Reply #30 on: June 22, 2004, 01:54:05 PM »
Here's = here is

is = singular

You're referring to more than one. You need here're or "here are".

Heh...
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« Reply #31 on: June 22, 2004, 02:02:30 PM »
Ok, so it was a minor mistake.
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Yeah...that sounds like me <_<

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You were born in the land of Warrior Pride. You live to fight, you have a strong spirit, courage and bravery. Strong lord! Unsheath thy sword, rush into war and strip the enemy of his flesh down to the core.


Umm...yeah

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« Reply #32 on: June 22, 2004, 02:08:37 PM »
Xorlak, chould you complain to them that there wasteing space, because for some reason it's annoying me, I am annoying myself typeing this....

EDIT: Whatever, I no longer care, let's just do whatever
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« Reply #33 on: June 22, 2004, 03:39:35 PM »
(I'll neter tale a bit more later, I have no time right now... Sorry. But I'll enter the tale, fear not.)

Propably you should control my chars as NPCs before they enter. Whatever.

Name: Scorch
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Age: What was that? 30+? Propably. Or maybe not. Check first section Wink
Job: Air mage
Weapon: None, he's imprisoned.
Alliance: Dark Empire traitor, supported Iduran.
Description: Quite tall, his head is bold after rest of his burned-out hair fell, blind - but his sight will propably heal over time.
Bio: Huh... Imprisoned somewhere in the town.
Chapter 1 Bio: Battled with Draven, sort of lost and got imprisoned by the soldies once the constant battle drained him of his strength (after a small argue with Nagash)...

Name: Cheetah
Gender: Male
Race: Gepardi
Age: Eeeeh. Can't remember. Quite young.
Job: Shapeshifter
Weapon: Spear
Alliance: Neutral. Supports Iduran.
Description: Young Gepardi who began his life journey to collect souls of different enemies to transform into them.
Bio: Read description.
Chapter 1 Bio: Helped Iduran get out of castle, and headed with him toward the Romme storage/supply cave.

Name: Nagash
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Age: Old.
Job: Earth mage
Weapon: Staff
Alliance: Romme.
Description: Black-skinned, tribal-looking shaman with dreadlocks. Quite nervous. Has some sort of character division, sometimes he's calm and caring, sometimes he turns mad.
Bio: Was a high-ranked Romme mage, then led partisans.
Chapter 1 Bio: Wanted to save Scorch believing he's the weapon who could be used against Draven, but the impertinance of the air wizard drove him insane and he abanadoned Scorch to be imprisoned.
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TKGB cancelled Spyder.

Bastard.

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« Reply #34 on: June 22, 2004, 03:53:26 PM »
Awsome! Nobody new however, but still, awsome. I can't wait untill we start, just I hope it's not today or tomorrow, because I'm REALLY busy, well sorta today, just tomorrow I will be, mostly. Yeah...
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« Reply #35 on: June 22, 2004, 06:30:09 PM »
When it starts, I'm gonna have two characters to control...one in a location you guys aren't familiar with. She won't be on the island for a while, since the ship headed for the Island won't leave the port town for a couple days. So for one whole chapter, you guys have to read about Gyulim's trek through a port town.
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Yeah...that sounds like me <_<

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You were born in the land of Warrior Pride. You live to fight, you have a strong spirit, courage and bravery. Strong lord! Unsheath thy sword, rush into war and strip the enemy of his flesh down to the core.


Umm...yeah

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« Reply #36 on: June 22, 2004, 07:27:17 PM »
<span style='color:teal'>I have 3 characters to control, and all at the same time (Qeni and Zev never get seperated from Zeros', unless the story does something...and if I know you guys something will happen..heh...)</span>
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\"Runaway with my heart...
 Runaway with my hope...
 If I could make you mine...I\'ll go whereever you will go.\"

\"So lately, I\'ve been wondering...
 Who will be there to take my place...
 When I\'m gone, You\'ll need love...To light the shadows on your face.\"

\"If a great wave should fall...
 It would fall upon us...
 Well I hope there\'s someone out there...Who can bring me back to you.\"

\"Way up high or down low...I\'ll go wherever you will go.\"

\"Runaway with my love.\"

In your heart and mind, I\'ll stay with you all of time...

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« Reply #37 on: June 22, 2004, 10:19:59 PM »
Name: Seth Faowind

Gender: Male

Race: Drow

Age: 22 human years

Job: Ex-Monk with Drow magical abilities

Weapon(s): Steel Claws

Alliance: No alliance. Will join which cause he sees more justified later on

Description: Seth has Plantinum hair that goes about halfway down his back. You often can't see his emerald green eyes behind his hair. He weighs 132 pounds, and is 4 foot 7 inches. He wears A dark red tunic with leather straps on his neck, wrists, and a few on his torso. He has on a pair of baggy light blue pants. He has leather straps on his knees. He wears black boots with a pointy elf toe.

Personality-wise, Seth is anti-social, but will still talk to people. He keeps idle chit chat to an absolute minimum however. It's a bad idea to sneak up on him because he is jumpy at times. Seth is almost always sad. Seth is a pretty deep guy. He gets lost in thought often.

Bio: Seth was raised by the monastry. His parents abandoned him as a child (I know, very cliche, but gimme a break). The monastry treated him badly because he was a Drow, but taught, feed, and clothed none the less. The children in the monastry always teased him about his platinum hair and would never play with him. This is why Seth is anti-social. Fueled by his unhappiness, he trained immensely. He eventually became the strongest person in the whole monastry. His grades in the monastry were poor. He hated working with herbs, almost as much as he hated the monastries god. He was such a great combatant that he taught his teachers a thing a two however. Because of his poor grades, his lack of faith in the monastries god, and his over-all unpopularity, Seth was kicked out of the monastry at the age of 17 human years. Seth knew of his heritage, and knew he had supurb abilities if he could only be taught to use them. Seth often pondered about the creation of the universe, and the existance of a greater being. He knew the monastries teachings of god were wrong, what god would punish him like this? What god would condemn all races but humans? No god worth worshipping! Seth decided to seek out his own race so they could teach him the magic of Drows. He believed if he became strong enough, he could reach the Shrine of Tarrb, which was guarded by many fabled demi-gods. If he could reach the Shrine of Tarrb, all would be revealed. He hijacked a cargo ship and reached the Continent of the Drows. Over a period of 2 years, Seth learned various Drow abilities. He finally set off to find the Shrine of Tarrb. He never found it after 2 years, and now he just wanders aimlessly.

Sorry about the long bio! XD
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         <span style=\'color:green\'>The Cyber Wolf- End Transmission

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We barely remember who or what came before this precious moment,
We are choosing to be here right now. Hold on, stay inside
This holy reality, this holy experience.
Choosing to be here in

This body. This body holding me. Be my reminder here that I am not alone in
This body, this body holding me, feeling eternal
All this pain is an illusion.

Alive, I

In this holy reality, in this holy experience. Choosing to be here in

This body. This body holding me. Be my reminder here that I am not alone in
This body, this body holding me, feeling eternal
All this pain is an illusion.

Twirling round with this familiar parable.
Spinning, weaving round each new experience.
Recognize this as a holy gift and celebrate this chance to be alive and breathing.

This body holding me reminds me of my own mortality.
Embrace this moment. Remember. we are eternal.
all this pain is an illusion.

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« Reply #38 on: June 23, 2004, 10:08:56 AM »
Long bios are good!

MotD: A totally independent quest alongside the rest of the RP should add a whole new dimension to the story.  Good idea!

Cesque:  If you can't make the start of the chapter, don't worry.  We'll say Cheetah overslept and Scorch is chained up anyway (heh...)

Chapter 2 will begin this Saturday.  (I'll just re-open the original topic.  No need for a new one.)

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You're referring to more than one. You need here're or "here are".


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Heh...
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« Reply #39 on: June 23, 2004, 10:48:14 AM »
LOL! It's a shame that nobody will meet Gyulim till Chapter 3...what a pity. I'd like to see how Draven reacts when he sees an Aritan girl on Romme Island, lol. Of course, it'll be bad enough when Shin Yong Tsing and Draven cross paths.
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Yeah...that sounds like me <_<

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You were born in the land of Warrior Pride. You live to fight, you have a strong spirit, courage and bravery. Strong lord! Unsheath thy sword, rush into war and strip the enemy of his flesh down to the core.


Umm...yeah

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« Reply #40 on: June 24, 2004, 04:58:56 PM »
Quote from: "Xorlak"
Chapter 2 will begin this Saturday.  (I'll just re-open the original topic.  No need for a new one.)

Well I think you should make a new topic, it's just you know...SO MANY PAGES! OH SO MANY! But I'm not sure if just one man's opinion will change that, so....Help me out here guys!
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« Reply #41 on: June 24, 2004, 05:29:34 PM »
I think it is best to have it on the same topic as Chapter 1.
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« Reply #42 on: June 24, 2004, 05:34:06 PM »
:angry: Gr you!
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« Reply #43 on: June 24, 2004, 08:20:17 PM »
<span style='color:green'>I agree with you Dudeman...it will get confusing for most.</span>
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\"Runaway with my heart...
 Runaway with my hope...
 If I could make you mine...I\'ll go whereever you will go.\"

\"So lately, I\'ve been wondering...
 Who will be there to take my place...
 When I\'m gone, You\'ll need love...To light the shadows on your face.\"

\"If a great wave should fall...
 It would fall upon us...
 Well I hope there\'s someone out there...Who can bring me back to you.\"

\"Way up high or down low...I\'ll go wherever you will go.\"

\"Runaway with my love.\"

In your heart and mind, I\'ll stay with you all of time...

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« Reply #44 on: June 24, 2004, 08:39:30 PM »
Very Happy  DeGr you!
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