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Blob Dude

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« on: February 17, 2005, 08:20:17 AM »
One of my other projects I started is this story called "Secrets".

It's about a girl called Kim, who when she was 15 her parents died when their home exploded from a gas accident.
The story follows on now that she is 25 and living with her aunt in Los Angeles. Although the police declared what happened to her parents as accidental deaths, Kim isn't convinced and is becoming increasingly paranoid - especially after an incident that happened while she was visiting England..


I've uploaded a short 'taster' of the beginning of the story in PDF format to download. Would be nice if some could check it out and tell me what they think of the story line etc Smile

<a href='http://www.impossibleprod.mysticsoftware.net/files/Secrets%20Taster.pdf' target='_blank'>Download</a> (Right click and 'Save As')

Was going to do this as a comic book story, but decided to write it. Look on my site to see a couple pages of the comic version (under "<a href='http://www.impossibleprod.mysticsoftware.net/' target='_blank'>Other Projects</a>")

-Enjoy!
« Last Edit: February 20, 2005, 10:26:20 AM by Blob Dude »
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« Reply #1 on: February 17, 2005, 02:32:02 PM »
Yeah I looked at that.


 Looks to be a very good story, if you can pull it off.
 (usually whenever I start writing stories they end up in a corner of my computer, just taking up space)
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« Reply #2 on: February 17, 2005, 03:38:18 PM »
Well so far I've wrote 14 pages.

Got a little writers block at the moment though Sad
But I think I know a way to get past it! Been thinking of how to carry on the next part of the story for a while now.
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