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Tough Dragon

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« on: October 09, 2005, 10:13:14 AM »
Name: Tough Dragon

Age: 24

Gender: Male

Class: Protecter of the new earth.  After the other earth dies.

Race: Dragon race

Weapons: An Ax that can change into many different weapons.  Called the Double changing Ax.

Hair: Black hair

Facial Hair: None

Height: 6 feet

Weight: unknown

Clothing:  Red shirt with blue pants.

Abilities: My special moves are Energy blast and Ultimate Destructive Force.
 
Fire balls: Normal blast that can be used by the Dragon race.

Bio: A guy from the Dragon race a Dragon race is the people who can shoot fire from there hands. Or shoot special kinds of powers and can transform into special things.  Like me I can Transform into Devil Madness Mode.  And blast energy, fire and special's.

Personality: Acts normal but acually a protecter.


//My actual age in real life is 11 so you guys know I'm sorry that I lied.  So what do you guy's think about my bio.//
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« Last Edit: October 09, 2005, 10:19:02 AM by Tough Dragon »

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« Reply #1 on: October 09, 2005, 11:21:39 AM »
I have a problem with the axe. If it's called the "Double changing Ax "that can "change into many different weapons", why the hell is it called double changing?

And as for the abilities I suggest you stop watching Dragonball Z and try to pick some abilities that don't make it seem you are trying to access "god mode" I don't want to dive into specifics about your skills because you haven't described them in detail (which I suggest you do so I can get a good idea).

And what kind of "dragon race" are you? The demi-human kind? Or the big-ass flying dragon kind? You need to be specific
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« Reply #2 on: October 09, 2005, 05:19:58 PM »
*sigh* Same old n00bish Puff Dragon...

 Razz Just kidding. So don't reply back thinking i'm serious...

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Weight: unknown

250 pounds seems to fit you.  Razz j/k

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//My actual age in real life is 11 so you guys know I'm sorry that I lied. So what do you guy's think about my bio.//


Your 11? Funny, you act like your a year or two older then that.
« Last Edit: October 09, 2005, 05:29:17 PM by Aminaga »
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« Reply #3 on: October 09, 2005, 08:11:50 PM »
i thought tough dragon was one of your freinds from school. he isnt?

 also, heres my input on your bio:

 this new earth stuff sounds kind of cheesy and like it came from a cruddy anime cartoon. maybe make it a bit more serious and less silly?

 and if they're dragons why do they transform into devils?
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« Reply #4 on: October 10, 2005, 10:23:20 AM »
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i thought tough dragon was one of your freinds from school. he isnt?


It's seems like that, but surprisingly, he's not from school. We met at an old message board about a year or two ago though, so I did know him before he joined MS...
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« Reply #5 on: October 10, 2005, 10:36:42 AM »
Needs more detail. Like, my guy acts normal? That makes no sence when it comes to personality.

You're 11? That dosen't surprize me. No offience, but you can't pass for somebody in there 20s at all.
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« Reply #6 on: October 11, 2005, 04:04:27 PM »
Quote from: "Aminaga"
*sigh* I'm the Same old n00bish Ami Rat crap...

 Razz Just kidding. So don't reply back thinking I'm crazy because I am...
250 pounds seems to fit me.  Razz j/k
Your 11? Funny, you act like your a year or two older then that.


Just kidding. Here's a fix.

Name: Tough Dragon

Age: 24

Gender: Male

Class: Protecter of the new version of earth. After the other earth dies.

Race: Dragon race.  It's called the dragon race because they were people that can transform into dragons.  And some people can transform into devils.  There original planet is Planet Dragon.  Some can transform into Devils because some people from the devil planet brought special air that changes peoples bodies so they can change into devils.

Weapons: An Ax that can change into many different weapons. Called the Double changing Ax.  It's called the Double Changing Ax because it has two sharp sides that are the same.  and it's an ax.  That can change.  The two sharp sides are like a two mixed Ax.

Hair: Black hair

Facial Hair: None

Height: 6 feet

Weight: unknown

Clothing: Red shirt with blue pants.

Abilities: My special moves are Energy blast and Ultimate Destructive Force.  Ultimate Destructive Force is when you put your hands seperate ways left and right.  And put energy out your body into you hand and rotate your hands.  Intill you have lots of energy put your hands together the ball turns huge.  And put it in either your left or right hand and blast.  Energy blast is when you put energy in you hand and just blast.

Fire balls: Normal blast that can be used by the Dragon race.

Bio: A guy from the Dragon race a Dragon race is the people who can shoot fire from there hands. Or shoot special kinds of powers and can transform into special things. Like me I can Transform into Devil Madness Mode. And blast energy, fire and special's.

Personality: Nice and Kind.  Warning don't make him mad or he'll turn into Devil Madness Mode.

Forms: Devil Madness Mode.

Devil Madness mode:

Tough Dragon:
« Last Edit: October 11, 2005, 04:18:48 PM by Tough Dragon »