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[Mark of the Dragon]

Ever since the world began turning
the realm of the gods remained sealed
as the almighty ones watched over us...

Once a century, seven children are gifted
with the power to open the portal to the realm
and to create a period of great blessings...

However, the realm of the dead has cursed another
seven with a similar power. When used, the evil
portal opens, and the underworld is free to overrun
the living world.

Only once was the dark portal open. Nobody remembers
how it was sealed, nor does anyone know how
humanity was able to survive. The only thing that
the books speak of is one last warrior standing.

This is the time where the seven light and seven
dark children have been given life and matured
into fine young men and women.

If the dark portal should open again, the gods
fear that no force in the living or divine realms
can stop the great evil that lurks on the dark borders...

[Spyder]

Not bad. It could use a comma between "dead" and "curses" in the third paragraph though, otherwise it starts to sound like your talking about "dead curses". Also, how would the first seven children create a period of great blessing, if at the same time, another seven children are causing chaos?

[Mark of the Dragon]

The children themselves don't cause it; they just have the gift/curse of opening the portal when gathered there.

The only way the dark portal would be opened would be if there was somebody in the living world who forced them to gather at the portal.



By the way, I edited the third paragraph.

[Spyder]

Hmm, ok, that's starting to get more interesting. And yeah, your edited paragraph works better.

[The end]

Sounds good, if you ask me. Nothing more to add.

[Mark of the Dragon]

Alright guys, I need input on a battle system. So far, I have these things decided:

-RUSH (limit breaks fueled by Andrenaline status)
-Andrenaline (x2 on all stats, 1/2 def., rush available)
          -Active at < 1/8 hp
-Fatigue(1/2 all stats; no criticals possible; 1/5 miss rate)
          -Active at 1/8 HP - 1/3 HP
-Status Effects Listed Below

• Poison</li>
• Slow</li>
• Haste</li>
• Paralyzed</li>
• Mirror</li>
• Blind</li>
• Stoned</li>
• Overflow</li>
• Venom</li>
• Virus</li>
• Sealed</li>
• Regenerate</li>
• Immune</li>
• Empowered</li>

-Heart Rate (so you can't just use power attacks the whole time)
-Stats pop up in a window when a player's turn comes up
-2 Character Support
-3 Enemy Support
-ATB System

[Zeros']

Sounds like a poem..

[quoaz]

I tihnk the BS is good,as for the Prelude,It makes me think of The Legend of Zelda for The SNES. But good.

[Mark of the Dragon]

Hmm...too Zelda-ish...I'll see if I can change it a bit...

[quoaz]

^_^ lol ok,need I remind you there there were 8 desended sages in That game not 7?


I konw my zelda games

[Mark of the Dragon]

You know what, you are right. There were 8 (forgot about the wise man!)

[quoaz]

lol I'm helping!!!



oh I can't wait to show the first demo of The Ni......nothing!

[Zeros']

Actually there only 3 wise men...Melcheoir(sp?), Balathazor and Gaspar. I only know that from Evangelion. I watch too much Evangelion...

[quoaz]

lol yeah.....

[Zeros']

Of course...that probably has nothing to do with this...