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D. Ein

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« Reply #60 on: June 29, 2006, 02:45:38 PM »
my post is cooler than yours, dm.

*wild west setting, tumbleweed everywhere, dm and d. ein getting ready for a quick-draw*
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« Reply #61 on: June 29, 2006, 08:11:48 PM »
Well, I didn't say hell had to be chaotic, just that that's the general coconscious. I don't really mind either way, just as long as it's properly set up and established through the story, which I don't think that one post accomplished.

Anyway, this has undoubtedly been the best chapter yet. I just wish I would have been able to keep up more. (Heh...) Sorry about the sporadic Retan updates. I hope to bring them back in full swing next chapter. (Which, by the way Nick, will only be a one night interlude. There's too much left unresolved to do a few year one.)

Now to try to catch up with my DALpedia articles during the break... (Heh...)
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« Reply #62 on: June 29, 2006, 10:28:48 PM »
Probably Chapter 11 should take place a few years after words. In fact I have a character planned that would work best if it were a number of years later (like 20). Plus Chapter 11 would be nice to get a new story line, like the different one with chapter 6.

I see it more like this...

Chapter 1-5: The 6 Weapons
Chapter 6-10: Aspye Revolution / The Rise and fall of Empires

And then like...

Chapter 11-15: The Revenge of Scumfreeze
Chapter 16-20: The Wrath of Rink
Chapter 21-25: Haraldur secretly charges an attack for five chapters and then starts destroying the world, except for his own, because they teleport to a different dimension.

Oh by the way I have the pre-story for <a href='http://www.darkagegames.net/dalpedia/index.php/Abodahon' target='_blank'>Abodahon</a> done. I don't have the Chapter 9 bio, but most of that is included for <a href='http://www.darkagegames.net/dalpedia/index.php/Duilin' target='_blank'>Duilin</a>'s bio.

So is anything unclear or missing from my big Abodahon story line?
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« Reply #63 on: July 01, 2006, 01:25:41 PM »
Haraldur died. Sad

Does anyone know why he isn't posting here anymore? Did he say anything to anyone?
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!!!! , ...

—staring wildly up and down
the here we are now judgment day

cross the threshold have no dread
lift the sheet back in this way.
here is little Effie’s head
whose brains are made of gingerbread

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« Reply #64 on: July 01, 2006, 04:17:13 PM »
So basically you are asking that I add more detail next time, Xorlak? To not be so lazy? OK, then.

Ein: Here I am! Already planning for next chapter too!
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« Reply #65 on: July 01, 2006, 04:37:32 PM »
Heh, I have very little plans for next chapter. I'm just hopping to have bunch of cool battles. I might have a couple things come in, but it might happen if there is going to be a chapter 11 (and I hope there is).

I am assuming there will be because I can't see the victory or defeat of the Aspyes and Draven and Retan's plans all being launched and concluded in one chapter.

I might think of some new things later on depending how the story goes. Me and Haraldur had a lot of fun attaching our storylines together. Eh Haraldur?
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« Reply #66 on: July 01, 2006, 04:49:12 PM »
Why the pluperfect tense, Dude Man? Razz
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« Reply #67 on: July 01, 2006, 04:53:31 PM »
I think the fact I don't know what "pluperfect" means, may answer your question. Laughing
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« Reply #68 on: July 01, 2006, 05:41:56 PM »
Present tense: now
Imperfect tense: "was running"
Perfect tense: "ran"
Pluperfect tense: "had run"
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« Reply #69 on: July 01, 2006, 09:27:25 PM »
Oh well the reason for the...pluperfect tense is because the chapter is over.

And also mostly because I don't talk good to. My English is worse than peoples who speak it as there second language. I think my brain flue away when I was young. Razz
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« Reply #70 on: July 02, 2006, 08:40:04 AM »
We did 9 of these things already.  I don't see any reason why there won't be an 11.  Or 20, for that matter.  (Heh...)
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« Reply #71 on: July 02, 2006, 06:32:47 PM »
Why would we want it to end?
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« Reply #72 on: July 02, 2006, 06:42:00 PM »
Bah. And I thought Tsu and Aura's finale had a chance at that top 10. Oh well.
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« Reply #73 on: July 02, 2006, 06:56:27 PM »
Trent, you pessimist you...

Can't you keep their story going? I don't know if you've noticed, but my characters (if you ever read my posts) have absolutely no storyline. General goals, maybe, like Kronos (take over the world! mwahahaha), but no storyline as such. I make it up as I go along. Smile
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—staring wildly up and down
the here we are now judgment day

cross the threshold have no dread
lift the sheet back in this way.
here is little Effie’s head
whose brains are made of gingerbread

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« Reply #74 on: July 02, 2006, 10:40:50 PM »
Haraldur: We wouldn't really. But everything needs an end. Or not?

It'd be nice to see how far we can go. I'd be funny to see it ending when we all die. (Like in real life, making our final posts on our deathbed.) Razz

Trent: Keep trying man, you can do it.  Wink

Xorlak: Yeah I can see a Chapter 20. I wonder how many of us will still be there.

Hopefully, Draven, Zeros' and Duilin will continue to be in the rest of chapters. Seeing, as they are currently the only characters to be in every chapter.
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