Wow...

[Zeros']

Well, as the topic says... Wow... I look back on the early DAL posts and... Well, we've improved a lot, don't you think?

[Dude Man]

I think we all have. I find embarrassment in my old posts. Just look how shitty they were...

Duilin battles along with the other Dark Warriors. Smashing the Romme soilders with his mace. He trips and falls on the ground and cuts himself on the leg on a droped sword. He limps over and goes and sits on a rock...
"What am I doing?" He says to himself. He looks at the cut on his leg. "Ow...."
He looks at the fighting going on. "Why is it that I feal that what is happening is wrong if I'm with the DARK Empire. I'm evil...Or am I....."
He countinues to sit on the rock hopeing that none of the Commanders Of The Dark Empire will notice him and start yelling at him for not fighting.

Horrible spelling and terrible writing style. He trips and falls. He limps over to a rock. "I'm evil...Or am I....."

Think that's bad, look at my second post...

Duilin sit on the rock but then a soilder say he better start fighting before he gets in trouble.
"Yeah your right" He get's up and takes out his mace. "I better go start fighting"
He runs of smashing away a few Romme Soilders with his Mace.

   

His right?

I'd seriously consider re-writing most of the first chapter if we where to publish this in any way.

[D. Ein]

If we WHERE, DM? If we where what? Where? Huh?

Looks like I'm not the only one who needs to go to an ESL school.

And yes, I agree... A lot of things have improved. Looking back at the Iron Wing... I felt like editing the posts so that all it says is "[edited by user]". In fact, sometimes, I write up a post, then look at it the next day, and go like, wow, what was I smoking?

[Xorlak]

Geez, my first post is mangled with run-ons.  I have like five commas in one sentence.  (Heh...)

[Dude Man]

If we WHERE, DM? If we where what? Where? Huh?

 

Well, that was a typo, it's completely different than the you're/your thing! And you don't have to be such a jerk about it. Capitalizing letters, barbaric I say!

[Burton Pro]

I don't want to look at my posts :/ Shivers*

[Drannic_Lord01]

Hmm... Looking over all of the chapters, you do see a LOT of improvements. I guess you guys 'have' come a long way. I'm still just a noob, though... I hope my posts are okay, man. That would suck if someone I don't even know sends me a private message saying 'your spelling blows' or something like that...... ugh...

Anyways, it looks really fantastic from where I started. I think that's what probably motivated me to join. Well, I hope I dont stay a noob for much longer anyhow...

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~Drannic~

Take the drannic route in life... it's motivating!

[Dude Man]

Hmm... Looking over all of the chapters, you do see a LOT of improvements. I guess you guys 'have' come a long way. I'm still just a noob, though... I hope my posts are okay, man. That would suck if someone I don't even know sends me a private message saying 'your spelling blows' or something like that...... ugh...

Anyways, it looks really fantastic from where I started. I think that's what probably motivated me to join. Well, I hope I dont stay a noob for much longer anyhow...

Meh, a noob is a new person who doesn't know anything about anything and does everything wrong because he doesn't even bother to learn and they usually talk "liek thay r on teh chat line". D. Ein is a good example of a noob. Razz

You'd be more of a newb(ie). Since a newb is just somebody who is new.

[D. Ein]

Hey! I am so not a noob!!

But it would help if I could have some free st00fs plx.

Also, to keep with the thread's topic: I actually think my very first post is the best one I've ever made. The rest are just not interesting...

EDIT: Oh my. I just noticed I bumped a 2-day topic. Better hide, before Tosoto, the Slayer of the Ancient Post Bumpers finds me and, er... slays me. Yeah.

[Drannic_Lord01]

Thanks, Dude man. That's a real compliment comming from a moderator.

So how does everybody like Dark Age Legends so far? It's going good for most of us, which I think is exactly how everything should be and more...

(Don't ask me why I put the '...' every other post. I have to! It freshens the savory goodness of all posts!)

'Til next time on Dark Age Forums!

Ugh... I just ruined the moment, didn't I? Ah well. See you guys when DAL sign-ups for thirteen begin!

[Dude Man]

Meh, I'm only a moderator for DAL. I don't need to do much moderation work, just give the "thumbs up" to new characters, and I've only spotted a couple problems in a few characters so far.

[Drannic_Lord01]

Sweet! We have a new guy joining the ever-lasting, ever-enjoyable ever... pretty much everything RP! It's going to be great this time around, guys, I can just feel it! I'm ready to RP!

Also, who here likes to write as a hobby?

[Jenia]

That would definetly be me. I have a pwetty book in the works, as well as several written plans for worlds and...ugh...just several written plans ^_^

[Drannic_Lord01]

I'm bored... Why can't DAL just start! Ugh!

I don't mean to complain, but I guess it's just because of the fact that I started a little late in the story. I'm just so friggen bored! OMG!

[Dude Man]

No offence Drannic, but you kinda need to chill out a bit. Razz

Well, I find DAL and posting here to be a hobby so I guess 'typing' would be more of a hobby for me.